Question

rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. do not change the sentences meaning. this thesis statement is based on disneys finding nemo. your answer nemo, not marlin, has the experience of going through the most drastic transformation in the film.

Explanation:

To make the sentence concise while preserving its meaning, we combine the phrases logically. The original sentence parts are "Nemo, not Marlin", "has", "the experience of going through", "the most drastic transformation in the film". We arrange them to form a clear and concise sentence: "Nemo, not Marlin, has the experience of going through the most drastic transformation in the film."

Answer:

Nemo, not Marlin, has the experience of going through the most drastic transformation in the film.