Question

try again! answer two in a row correctly to continue.
rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. do not change the sentences meaning.
this thesis statement is based on charlie and the chocolate factory by roald dahl.
your answer
charlie and the chocolate
factory is inappropriate for
readers who are young because
it glorifies unhealthy eating.

Explanation:

The sentence can be made more concise by replacing "readers who are young" with "young readers" as it is a more straightforward and less wordy way to convey the same meaning.

Answer:

Charlie and the Chocolate Factory is inappropriate for young readers because it glorifies unhealthy eating.