Question

revising text to eliminate subjective language
correct the following sentence by choosing the revision that best eliminates subjective language.
nazario’s editorial will make readers want to take action.
○ nazario’s editorial makes readers think about the experiences of refugees
○ nazario’s attempt to present facts to the reader is obscured by emotional details.
○ nazario’s editorial uses language that encourages readers to take action
○ nazario’s biography does a better job of persuading readers to act

Explanation:

La oración original "Nazario's editorial will make readers want to take action" es subjetiva porque utiliza "will make" (que implica una suposición). La opción "Nazario's editorial uses language that encourages readers to take action" es objetiva ya que describe el uso del lenguaje (un hecho observable) en lugar de hacer suposiciones sobre la reacción de los lectores. Las otras opciones:

• "Nazario's editorial makes readers think about the experiences of refugees" cambia el tema (de llamar a la acción a hacer pensar en experiencias).
• "Nazario's attempt to present facts to the reader is obscured by emotional details" introduce un juicio subjetivo ("attempt", "obscured").
• "Nazario's biography does a better job of persuading readers to act" compara con un "better job" (subjetivo) y cambia el objeto (de editorial a biografía).

Answer:

Nazario's editorial uses language that encourages readers to take action.