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read the paragraph. what would be the best way to correctly edit the un…

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read the paragraph. what would be the best way to correctly edit the underlined sentence?

music piracy occurs when you share music with friends, such as giving friends a free copy of a song. this behavior may not seem like a big deal, but it can have a huge impact on the music industry. their is a lot of people working together to create a song, songwriters, audio engineers, computer technicians, producers, recording artists, and more. a study by the institute for policy innovation found that music piracy led to over 70,000 lost jobs and billions of dollars in lost wages. in order to keep your favorite singers in business, its important to avoid getting music without paying for it.

a. there is a lot of people working together to create a song, songwriters, producers, recording artists, and others.

b. there are a lot of people working together to create a song, songwriters, producers, recording artists, and others.

c. their are a lot of people working together to create a song: songwriters, producers, recording artists, and others.

d. there are a lot of people working together to create a song, including songwriters, producers, recording artists, and others.

e. there is a lot of people working together to create a song, songwriters, producers, recording artists, and others.

Explanation:

Brief Explanations
  1. First, correct the pronoun/verb error: "Their" is incorrect; the correct phrase starts with "There". Since "a lot of people" is plural, the verb must be "are" (not "is").
  2. Next, fix the punctuation/structure error: The original incorrectly lists examples after a comma without a transition. Using "including" clearly introduces the list of roles, making the sentence grammatically correct and logically clear.
  3. Eliminate incorrect options: A/E use the singular verb "is" with plural "people"; C uses the wrong pronoun "Their"; B uses a comma splice to introduce examples without a proper transition word.

Answer:

D. There are a lot of people working together to create a song, including songwriters, producers, recording artists, and others.