Question

which version of the sentence is the best revision using academic voice? * 6 points i think this predicament highlights how the customs of one community (reardan) can seem totally strange for someone from another community (the rez). a) no change b) i think this predicament highlights how the customs of one community (reardan) can seem very unusual for someone from another community (the rez). c) through this predicament, alexie highlights how the customs of one community (reardan) can appear unusual to someone from another community (the reservation). d) through this predicament, alexie highlights how the customs of one community (reardan) can seem weird for someone that’s originally from a different community (the rez).

Explanation:

To determine the best revision with academic voice, we analyze word choice and clarity. Academic voice prefers precise, formal language and clear phrasing. Option C uses "appear unusual" (more formal than "seem strange/weird") and correctly places the parenthetical explanation. "Through this predicament, Alexie highlights how the customs of one community (Reardan) can appear unusual to someone from another community (the reservation)" is clear, uses appropriate vocabulary, and structures the sentence logically for academic tone. Other options have less formal wording ("totally strange", "weird") or less clear phrasing.

Answer:

C) Through this predicament, Alexie highlights how the customs of one community (Reardan) can appear unusual to someone from another community (the reservation).