Question

read this problem sentence:
learning a foreign language in elementary school is great because younger students are not embarrassed to speak out plus they can engage in different songs and games that older students usually are less willing to participate in.
which revision best improves the language in this passage while leaving the original meaning intact?
o a. the best part of learning a foreign language are the songs and games that are fun to learn.
o b. learning a foreign language earlier is preferred. younger students are more willing to speak out and participate in songs and games than older students.
o c. older students are just as flexible in learning foreign languages as younger children because their brains are just as flexible as those of younger students.
o d. younger students are more confident. they like learning a foreign language that includes songs and games

Explanation:

The question asks which revision best improves the language while keeping the original meaning. Option A is incorrect as it only describes the songs and games as fun. Option B changes the original meaning by emphasizing learning earlier. Option C is about the flexibility of older students' brains, which is not in the original. Option D maintains the original idea of younger students being confident and liking language with songs and games.

Answer:

D. Younger students are more confident. They like learning a foreign language that includes songs and games.