Question

prompt: you have just read \the white umbrella\ by gish jen. how does the narrator’s desire for belonging influence her behavior? rl.3 in your response, make sure to include all parts of a complete paragraph:

• a claim that clearly answers the prompt
• at least two pieces of evidence
• reasoning to explain how your evidence proves your claim

also, make sure to incorporate relevant unit vocabulary in your writing.

checklist for writing a complete paragraph:

• circle or bold your claim.

does your claim clearly answer all parts of the prompt?
a. yes
b. no; i will go back and revise my claim.

• underline each piece of evidence you included.

do you have two pieces of evidence?
a. yes
b. no; i will go back and revise my evidence.

• highlight your reasoning.

does your reasoning explain how your evidence proves your claim?
a. yes
b. no; i will go back and revise my reasoning.

(handwritten: what does the narrator do because she wants to belong)

Explanation:

To answer, first state the claim: The narrator’s desire for belonging influences her to mimic others and hide her true self. Then, evidence 1: She covets the white umbrella, wanting to fit in with the other girls (underline this). Evidence 2: She lies about her home life, pretending to be like her peers (underline this). Reasoning: These actions show she modifies behavior to feel accepted, proving her desire drives her to conform. Incorporate vocab like "conformity" or "identity."

Answer:

The narrator’s desire for belonging influences her behavior by driving her to conform and hide her true identity. For example, she fixates on the white umbrella, longing to have what the other girls do to feel included (underline this evidence). Additionally, she lies about her family and home life, pretending to be like her peers to fit in (underline this evidence). This behavior shows her desire for belonging makes her alter her actions and hide aspects of herself, as she believes conforming will help her feel accepted.