Question

which of these excerpts from the outsiders best represents an external conflict?

\i fought to get loose, and almost did for a second; then they tightened up on me and the one on my chest slugged me a couple of times.\
\i automatically hitched my thumbs in my jeans and slouched, wondering if i could get away if i made a break for it.\
\anyway, i went on walking home, thinking about the movie, and then suddenly wishing i had some company.\
\i wish they were more gray, because i hate most guys that have green eyes, but i have to be content with what i have.\

Explanation:

Define external conflict

An external conflict involves a struggle between a character and an outside force, such as another character, society, or nature.

Analyze the options

• Option 1: "I fought to get loose, and almost did for a second; then they tightened up on me and the one on my chest slugged me a couple of times." This describes a physical struggle between the narrator and other characters (Character vs. Character), which is a clear external conflict.
• Option 2: "I automatically hitched my thumbs in my jeans and slouched, wondering if I could get away if I made a break for it." This describes internal thoughts, hesitation, and decision-making (Internal Conflict).
• Option 3: "Anyway, I went on walking home, thinking about the movie, and then suddenly wishing I had some company." This describes personal thoughts and feelings of loneliness (Internal Conflict).
• Option 4: "I wish they were more gray, because I hate most guys that have green eyes, but I have to be content with what I have." This describes self-reflection and personal insecurity about physical appearance (Internal Conflict).

Select the best representation

The first excerpt is the only option that depicts a physical, external struggle against outside forces.

Answer:

• (A) "I fought to get loose, and almost did for a second; then they tightened up on me and the one on my chest slugged me a couple of times." (Correct answer)
• (B) "I automatically hitched my thumbs in my jeans and slouched, wondering if I could get away if I made a break for it."
• (C) "Anyway, I went on walking home, thinking about the movie, and then suddenly wishing I had some company."
• (D) "I wish they were more gray, because I hate most guys that have green eyes, but I have to be content with what I have."