Question

use this quote below to fix the faulty paraphrasing examples on the right in questions 7 - 10. \throughout history, he has punished kings and princes for oppressing poor slaves. even pharaoh and king sauls descendants were destroyed because of what they did to slaves.\ by richard allen, \to those who keep slaves and approve the practice\ *\he\ refers to god. not a good paraphrase. over time, god has dealt with kings and princes who mistreated slaves, leading to the downfall of figures like pharaoh and the descendants of king saul due to their actions against them. does not change sentence structure enough. only replaces original words with synonyms does not mention the source. changes the meaning of the original uses same phrasing as the original

Explanation:

• The paraphrase "Over time, God has dealt with kings and princes who mistreated slaves, leading to the downfall of figures like Pharaoh and the descendants of King Saul due to their actions against them" does not change the sentence structure enough. It just replaces "Throughout history" with "Over time" and "punished" with "dealt with", which is mainly just synonym replacement.
• It also uses similar phrasings as the original like "kings and princes", "Pharaoh", "descendants of King Saul" without re - structuring the sentence more comprehensively.

Answer:

• The box for "Does not change sentence structure enough" should be checked.
• The box for "Only replaces original words with synonyms" should be checked.
• The box for "Uses same phrasing as the original" should be checked.