Question

recall the idea you brainstormed earlier in the lesson. reevaluate the idea. why is the idea appropriate for this essay? check all the boxes that you agree with.

it is an event that people can relate to.
it is an interesting event that i can describe well.
it is an event that changed me.
it is an event that shows why i deserve the scholarship.
it is an event that gave me new goals.

Explanation:

Analyze the essay topic and purpose

Using the Scholarship Essay and Narrative Writing knowledge points, we evaluate the student's brainstormed topic: moving away from family at age eight. A scholarship essay requires a narrative that is personal, impactful, and directly connects a life-altering experience to personal growth, future goals, and why the student deserves the award.

Evaluate each option against the topic

Using the Prewriting Strategy knowledge point, we assess each checkbox:

• It is an event that people can relate to: Yes. Moving and experiencing family separation are universal themes of transition and adaptation that readers can empathize with.
• It is an interesting event that I can describe well: Yes. A major move at age eight is a vivid, sensory-rich memory that provides excellent material for descriptive narrative writing.
• It is an event that changed me: Yes. Moving away from family at a young age is a life-altering event that shapes independence and character.
• It is an event that shows why I deserve the scholarship: Yes. Overcoming the challenges of this transition demonstrates resilience, adaptability, and determination.
• It is an event that gave me new goals: Yes. Adapting to a new environment often sparks new perspectives, ambitions, and personal aspirations.

All five options are highly appropriate reasons for selecting this brainstormed idea for a narrative scholarship essay.

Answer:

• [x] It is an event that people can relate to. (Correct answer)
• [x] It is an interesting event that I can describe well. (Correct answer)
• [x] It is an event that changed me. (Correct answer)
• [x] It is an event that shows why I deserve the scholarship. (Correct answer)
• [x] It is an event that gave me new goals. (Correct answer)