Question

read the sentences.

its cool i was elected to the student council. and its cool that some of you were on my side.

which revision creates an appropriate tone?

i am delighted about my election to the student council. i would like to thank the people who helped me.

im over the moon about my election to the student council. yay, me! but i guess i should also say thanks to my pals who said good things about me—lol.

im impressed that i got elected to the student council. i must be pretty great at campaigning.

im jumping up and down about my election to the student council. you guys who helped me were so amazing.

Explanation:

The original sentences have an informal tone, and the goal is to create an appropriate (more formal and respectful) tone. The first option uses formal language ("I am delighted", "I would like to thank") which is appropriate. The other options have informal elements: the second has "Yay, me!", "LOL"; the third has a self - congratulatory and less formal tone; the fourth has "jumping up and down", "You guys" which are informal.

Answer:

A. I am delighted about my election to the student council. I would like to thank the people who helped me.