Question

read the passage and highlight sentence fluency errors you find. political documents from the time of the united states independence are important, other written accounts and even fiction from that time period can be just as valuable. such as journal entries and poetry. these documents are interesting to read they give glimpses into daily life and values during an important time in our countrys history. the best way to revise sentence 1 is to add and after the comma add but after the comma delete the comma

Explanation:

The highlighted sentence is a run - on. Adding “and” after the comma would properly connect the two independent clauses.

Answer:

add and after the comma