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read the excerpt from hidden figures. shetterly describes how katherine goble engaged with her colleagues. she asked early, she asked often, and she asked penetrating questions about the work. she asked with the highest respect for the natures of the brainy fellas she worked with, and she asked knowing that she was the right person for a task that needed the finest minds. read tamikas paraphrase of the excerpt. goble asked many thoughtful questions about the work. she asked these questions all the time, and she asked them with the utmost respect for the qualities of the intelligent men she worked with. which paraphrasing mistake does tamika make in this excerpt? she leaves out important details from the original text. she includes extra information that is not found in the original text. she changes the meaning of the ideas in the original text. she uses too many exact phrases from the original text
In paraphrasing, using too many exact phrases from the original text is a mistake. The original text has phrases like "asked early, she asked often" which Tamika's paraphrase "asked these questions all the time" doesn't fully capture in a re - phrased way. Also, "brainy fellas" is an important original term that could have been better paraphrased instead of using "intelligent men" (which is a bit of a direct substitution but still, the overall structure has too many elements close to the original).
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She uses too many exact phrases from the original text.