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read the paragraph.
1 the 1992 olympic games took place in barcelona, spain. 2 this marked
the first year that professional basketball players were permitted to represent
their countries in the games. 3 previously, only amateur players were
allowed to participate such as college athletes. 4 the us squad was called
\the dream team\ because it consisted of some of the best players in the
history of the game, including michael jordan, magic johnson, and larry
bird.
which sentence should be revised to improve this paragraphs sentence fluency?
sentence 1
sentence 2
sentence 3
sentence 4
To improve sentence fluency, we analyze each sentence. Sentence 3 has a misplaced phrase: "such as college athletes" should be rephrased or repositioned for clarity (e.g., "Previously, only amateur players, such as college athletes, were allowed to participate"). Other sentences flow more naturally.
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sentence 3