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a new adventure
the unsettling stature of frederique surprised me in the early morning hours just before our long - awaited trip. his body stood over me while i lay half asleep in the dingy cabin that had been our base camp for the past couple days. we had been preparing for our ascent up one of the most treacherous mountains in the world. this was not a normal experience for us; frederique needed a reason to start something new, since he had lost his job earlier that year.
he yelled as he tapped his foot on my shoulder. when my eyes met his smile, i could tell hed been ready to leave since the previous night. his demeanor, his alertness, was indescribably out of character. frederique was not usually this excited about anything, especially not anything challenging or heart wrenching. i gazed back at him with a questioning expression while i got up and got dressed, pretending not to notice that his bag was packed neatly and properly. i also pretended not to see that he had made breakfast—probably a couple of hours before—and that now he was sitting in front of his breakfast plate tapping his finger on the table in an irritating fashion.
i casually gathered my materials, and after a few minutes, frederique let out a sigh, not of resentment but with an understanding that we were not leaving until i finished getting ready. and so he walked out through the front door to let off some steam and to give me some space.
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select the correct answer.
which narrative technique would improve the development of this passage?
a. description of setting
b. dialogue
c. multiple plot lines
d. reflection
The passage already includes setting details (cabin, mountain ascent), has a single plot line, and lacks direct character interaction. Dialogue would add dynamic exchange between the narrator and Frederique, revealing their thoughts/feelings more vividly and improving character development and engagement. Multiple plot lines are unnecessary for this focused scene, and reflection is less impactful than direct interaction here.
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B. dialogue