Question

each paragraph discusses a different building technique, but the paper feels \choppy\ because the paragraphs do not clearly relate to one another. which revision would best improve cohesion among the ideas? add transition phrases such as in contrast, building on this approach, and as a result to signal shifts and connections between techniques. delete paragraph breaks so the essay reads as one continuous block of text. begin each paragraph with the same phrase for consistency. remove introductory sentences from each paragraph.

Explanation:

To improve cohesion (connection between ideas), transition phrases signal relationships. Deleting paragraphs or using same phrases doesn't enhance idea flow. Removing intros might disrupt context. Transition phrases like "In contrast" or "As a result" clarify how ideas relate.

Answer:

A. Add transition phrases such as In contrast, Building on this approach, and As a result to signal shifts and connections between techniques.