Question

redundancy practice worksheet
directions:
each sentence below contains redundant words or phrases.
rewrite each sentence by removing the unnecessary words while keeping the original
meaning.
use the space below each sentence to write your corrected version.

1. the final outcome of the championship game was completely unexpected by the fans and

players alike.

1. she made advance plans for the science fair to ensure every detail was perfectly

organized.

1. please return back the library book you borrowed last week so others can enjoy it too.
2. the past history of the ancient civilization reveals many interesting facts about their

culture and traditions.

1. he gave me a free gift during the promotional event held at the downtown convention

center.

1. they were in close proximity to the concert stage, allowing them to see every detail of the

performance.

1. the reason why he left early was due to a sudden and unexpected emergency at home.
2. each and every student in the class must submit their project by the end of the week.

Explanation:

For each sentence, identify redundant words/phrases. For example, "final outcome" - "outcome" implies finality. "Advance plans" - "plans" already suggest preparation. "Return back" - "return" is sufficient. "Past history" - "history" is about the past. "Free gift" - "gift" is free. "Close proximity" - "proximity" implies closeness. "The reason why... was due to" - redundant structure. "Each and every" - either "each" or "every" suffices.

Answer:

1. The outcome of the championship game was completely unexpected by the fans and players alike.
2. She made plans for the science fair to ensure every detail was perfectly organized.
3. Please return the library book you borrowed last week so others can enjoy it too.
4. The history of the ancient civilization reveals many interesting facts about their culture and traditions.
5. He gave me a gift during the promotional event held at the downtown convention center.
6. They were in proximity to the concert stage, allowing them to see every detail of the performance.
7. He left early due to a sudden emergency at home.
8. Each student in the class must submit their project by the end of the week. (Or "Every student in the class must submit their project by the end of the week.")