Question

use what you have learned in this lesson to revise the following passage for the appropriate audience and impact. select words and phrases that will strengthen this critical analysis essay.
in the declaration of independence, thomas jefferson talks about independence
supports independence
through his use of big words and fancy argument skills
. first, jefferson states his thesis, which makes it
independence. next,
formal english and classical argumentative structure
nd how he mistreats the american colonies
. finally, jefferson suggests that colonists should
, which is the obvious answer
regular words and argumentative structure
informal english and an argument

Explanation:

The passage is for a critical analysis essay, which requires formal, academic language that accurately reflects the rhetorical qualities of the Declaration of Independence. Thomas Jefferson used structured, formal rhetorical conventions, so the phrase should match this academic tone and factual accuracy.

Answer:

formal English and classical argumentative structure