Question

a student needs to edit his draft of a narrative. click two sentences that have errors in grammar usage.
it was my first time visiting another country. my trip to spain was one i would not forget. barcelona first, i toured, a land of exciting architecture, amazing food, and
incredible culture. i was expecting a modern, pulsating city filled with adventure. as i boarded the ship to take me to the north mediterranean sea, i felt an array of mixed
emotions.
barcelona is one of the most beautiful and exciting cities in the world. it has a huge number of attractions, including a city center, which retains its medieval street plan. my
favorite architect, gaudi designed some fascinating buildings that i would see. i knew i was in for an adventure.

Explanation:

1. In the sentence "Barcelona first, I toured, a land of exciting architecture, amazing food, and", the comma after "Barcelona first" is incorrect. It should be "First, I toured Barcelona, a land of exciting architecture, amazing food, and".
2. In the sentence "My trip to Spain was one I would not forget. Barcelona first, I toured, a land of exciting architecture, amazing food, and", the comma after "Barcelona first" is incorrect. It should be "My trip to Spain was one I would not forget. First, I toured Barcelona, a land of exciting architecture, amazing food, and".

Answer:

1. "Barcelona first, I toured, a land of exciting architecture, amazing food, and"
2. "My trip to Spain was one I would not forget. Barcelona first, I toured, a land of exciting architecture, amazing food, and"