Question

read the selection and answer the questions that follow
say yes to commercialism in schools
introduction
connor wrote an argumentative essay about commercialism. read connor’s essay for revisions that need to be made. when you finish reading, answer the questions.
1 (1) maybe it’s a beverage cup displaying a soda company’s name, or perhaps players’ uniforms have the logo of an athletic gear company on it. (2) these are only a few of the many ways that corporations have found their way into the u.s. public education system. (3) but is this such a problem?
2 (4) commercialism is a win - win situation for both parties involved. (5) for

1. what change should be made in sentence 1?

○ change players’ to player’s
○ change have to will have
○ change it to them
○ no change should be made.
clear all
unanswered

Explanation:

To determine the correct change for sentence 1, we analyze each option:

• "Change players' to player's": The plural possessive "players'" is correct here as it refers to multiple players' uniforms, so this is incorrect.
• "Change have to will have": The present perfect "have found" is appropriate to show an action that started in the past and continues, so changing to "will have" (future) is wrong.
• "Change it to them": In the phrase "athletic gear company on it", "it" refers to the singular "uniform" (each uniform has one logo), so "it" is correct, and changing to "them" (plural) is incorrect.
• "No change should be made": After analyzing the other options, none of the proposed changes are correct, so the sentence is fine as is.

Answer:

D. No change should be made.