Question

read the model sentence from lindsey leavitts going vintage.
i walk around the desk, still amazed at the out - of - body feeling, like everythings all floating or slow motion.
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use the words and phrases to create a new sentence that matches the model.
completely focused on her computer screen, until her fingers grew sore and heavy megan coded through the night,

Explanation:

The model sentence has a structure where the main action (I walk around the desk) is followed by a description of a state (still amazed at the out - of - body feeling) and then a comparison (like everything's all floating or slow motion). For the new sentence, "Megan coded through the night" is the main action. "Completely focused on her computer screen" describes her state, and "until her fingers grew sore and heavy" is a consequence (similar to a comparison in structure in terms of adding more detail to the main action).

Answer:

Megan coded through the night, completely focused on her computer screen, until her fingers grew sore and heavy.