Question

read the conclusion to a personal statement. in conclusion, my trips to the seashore have awakened an interest in marine biology. i am ready to move forward with my dream of becoming a marine biologist. what is the best way to improve the conclusion? add a sentence to the ending that summarizes the writers topic. add a sentence to the middle that reflects on the writers experiences. revise the final sentence to have a different tone. revise the first sentence to state a future goal.

Explanation:

La conclusión menciona la experiencia (viajes a la costa) y el objetivo (biólogo marino), pero carece de reflexión sobre cómo la experiencia generó el interés. Agregar una oración en el medio que reflexione sobre las experiencias refuerza la conexión.

Answer:

B. Add a sentence to the middle that reflects on the writer’s experiences.