Question

drag each tile to the correct box.

match each comment from a subject matter expert (sme) to its revision technique.

add borders on all sides of the diagrams to make them stand out.

replace the phrase \effect modifications\ with \make changes\ in all instructions.

remove the word basically and the phrase \sort of\ from various sentences.

delete unnecessary phrases

change the format

remove jargon

Explanation:

<pre_analysis>
{
"quality": "clear",
"question_count": 1,
"skills_matched": [
"direct_cot",
"explain_then_answer",
"tutor"
],
"needs_drawing": false,
"concepts_used": [],
"new_concepts": [
"Revision Techniques",
"SME Feedback"
],
"current_concepts": [
"Revision Techniques",
"SME Feedback",
"Technical Writing"
]
}
</pre_analysis>

<reasoning>

Analyze the first comment

The first comment is: "Add borders on all sides of the diagrams to make them stand out."

• This comment suggests modifying the visual presentation and layout of the document elements (diagrams).
• Among the available revision techniques ("delete unnecessary phrases", "change the format", "remove jargon"), this action directly corresponds to altering the visual presentation, which is change the format.

Analyze the second comment

The second comment is: "Replace the phrase 'effect modifications' with 'make changes' in all instructions."

• The phrase "effect modifications" is overly formal, bureaucratic, or technical terminology (jargon) that can be simplified to "make changes" for better clarity and readability.
• This action corresponds to remove jargon.

Analyze the third comment

The third comment is: "Remove the word basically and the phrase 'sort of' from various sentences."

• Words like "basically" and "sort of" are filler words or qualifiers that do not add meaning to technical instructions and should be omitted to make the writing more concise.
• This action corresponds to delete unnecessary phrases.

</reasoning>

<answer>

• Add borders on all sides of the diagrams to make them stand out. $

ightarrow$ change the format

• Replace the phrase "effect modifications" with "make changes" in all instructions. $

ightarrow$ remove jargon

• *Remove the word basically and the phrase "sort of" from various sentences.* $

ightarrow$ delete unnecessary phrases
</answer>

<post_analysis>
{
"subject": "Others",
"question_type": "Free Response",
"knowledge_point": [
"Others",
"Technical Writing",
"Revision Techniques"
]
}
</post_analysis>

Answer:

<pre_analysis>
{
"quality": "clear",
"question_count": 1,
"skills_matched": [
"direct_cot",
"explain_then_answer",
"tutor"
],
"needs_drawing": false,
"concepts_used": [],
"new_concepts": [
"Revision Techniques",
"SME Feedback"
],
"current_concepts": [
"Revision Techniques",
"SME Feedback",
"Technical Writing"
]
}
</pre_analysis>

<reasoning>

Analyze the first comment

The first comment is: "Add borders on all sides of the diagrams to make them stand out."

• This comment suggests modifying the visual presentation and layout of the document elements (diagrams).
• Among the available revision techniques ("delete unnecessary phrases", "change the format", "remove jargon"), this action directly corresponds to altering the visual presentation, which is change the format.

Analyze the second comment

The second comment is: "Replace the phrase 'effect modifications' with 'make changes' in all instructions."

• The phrase "effect modifications" is overly formal, bureaucratic, or technical terminology (jargon) that can be simplified to "make changes" for better clarity and readability.
• This action corresponds to remove jargon.

Analyze the third comment

The third comment is: "Remove the word basically and the phrase 'sort of' from various sentences."

• Words like "basically" and "sort of" are filler words or qualifiers that do not add meaning to technical instructions and should be omitted to make the writing more concise.
• This action corresponds to delete unnecessary phrases.

</reasoning>

<answer>

• Add borders on all sides of the diagrams to make them stand out. $

ightarrow$ change the format

• Replace the phrase "effect modifications" with "make changes" in all instructions. $

ightarrow$ remove jargon

• *Remove the word basically and the phrase "sort of" from various sentences.* $

ightarrow$ delete unnecessary phrases
</answer>

<post_analysis>
{
"subject": "Others",
"question_type": "Free Response",
"knowledge_point": [
"Others",
"Technical Writing",
"Revision Techniques"
]
}
</post_analysis>