Question

circle the incorrect pronoun shift. rewrite the sentence correctly. if you are willing to work hard, a salesperson can make a lot of money h

Explanation:

The original sentence has a pronoun shift from "you" (second - person) to "a salesperson" (third - person). To correct it, we can either keep the second - person throughout or the third - person throughout.

Answer:

• Incorrect pronoun: "a salesperson" (since the first part uses "you").
• Corrected sentence 1: If you are willing to work hard, you can make a lot of money.
• Corrected sentence 2: If a salesperson is willing to work hard, he/she can make a lot of money.