Question

amelia earhart’s birth was in 1897.
she lived in kansas as a child.
revise your work. to make your sentence flow, try changing birth into an action phrase so it matches with lived.
amelia earharts birthday was in 1897, and she lived in kansas as a child.
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hint
words or phrases in a list should all be in the same form. avoid mixing words that end in -ing with words that dont. make them match!

Explanation:

To make the sentences parallel in structure (both using action - like phrases), we can rewrite the first sentence. The word "birth" is a noun, and we need to change it to an action - related phrase. "Was born" is an action phrase that matches the verb "lived" in terms of the sentence's flow and structure. Also, "Kansas" is a proper noun and should be capitalized. So the revised sentence is: Amelia Earhart was born in 1897, and she lived in Kansas as a child.

Answer:

Amelia Earhart was born in 1897, and she lived in Kansas as a child.