Question

1. what revision, if any, should be made in sentence 21?

even when the league agreed on a resolution, there was no way to make member countries adhere to it.

even when the league agreed, there was no way to make member countries adhere to it on a resolution.

even when the league agreed on a resolution, there was no way to make member countries adhere to and follow a resolution.

no change is needed.

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Explanation:

To determine the correct revision, we analyze each option:

• The first option: "Even when the league agreed on a resolution, there was no way to make member countries adhere to it." has clear and logical phrasing. The phrase "agreed on a resolution" is correct, and "adhere to it" (referring to the resolution) is proper.
• The second option misplaces "on a resolution", making the sentence illogical as it suggests countries adhere to the league on a resolution, not the resolution itself.
• The third option is redundant with "adhere to and follow" (since "adhere to" already implies following).
• So, the original sentence (first option) is correct, and no change is needed.

Answer:

No change is needed.